Ah Breaking Dawn... I guess the best way is to just break it down(in no peticular order). First off it bugged me how Bella refered to her child as a "little nudger" at the times she called Renesmee that it kind of invalidated her existance as a being, to me it made it less personal more like she really was a parasite rather than a wonderful gift. I have to admit I cracked up at Edwards reaction to the news. I also hated Rose for being so obsessed with Bellas baby. Also I am not reall partial to the name "Renesmee", it just seems like she didnt even really try on that name(and it just sounds wierd), at least her middle name was better, an unusual take on a fairly common name.
I rather enjoyed how Bellas truck "Died of natural causes", the week after she aggreed to let Edward Replace it. I at once knew Jake had imprinted on Nessie when he saw her face and the book said somthing along the lines of earths gravity had no hold on him and he was attached to her by thousands of steel cables, or w/e it said.
And to wrap this up before it gets to long I flat out hated the end, the book seemed to be building towards an epic battle and then nothing. It's as if the NY symphony was building to the climax of a Mozart rendition when suddently the conductor was struck dead by the merciless act of god... I would have been perfectly happy with Zephrena(?) blinding them all, Alec and Jane destroyed and then they surrendered. I would have been fine with a no casualties outcome if only there was even a 2 page mini battle. But it did end on an intresting note non-the less finding Renesmee wasn't one of a kind.
And my final gripe, the fact that it ended with "The End".... I know not that big a deal, but after all that happened it was the most anti-climatic thing there was IMHO.